Music is a language of humanity, and it has the power to bring people of diversity regardless of their age under the same umbrella. I feel that there are only few exceptions when music fails to be global, but in most scenarios, it creates connections among humans.
Firstly, as many people say, music has no language, and therefore, anyone can enjoy music anytime from anywhere in the world. International concerts are the best example of this because often we see varieties of artist performing their native pieces and the crowd appreciate it fenomanaly. When performance reach people's hearts the boundaries of age or cultural adversities get pushed to an unimaginable extent.
Secondly, music has the ability to make people more tolerant which influences global connectivity. Through music we realise others' emotions on a deeper level, and as a result it helps us in generating new perspectives. Consequently, we start to comprehend, realise and appreciate previously unexplored ideas or philosophies better or at least, it makes us see the beauty of diversity. This is the only way to develop respect for difference which leads to more tolerance, and this can happen at any age because realisation is not limited to aging.
On the other hand, there can be certain music which is extremely biased towards certain beliefs and therefore, it is possible that not everyone would welcome it. Though this limitation will always persist as our planet is massively diversified, but I believe these are only rare cases -- music is mostly for everyone.
In conclusion, to bring humanity together music can play a key role as it can overcome the obstacles of age and dissimilarity. I think we can all feel the same feeling while experiencing a certain musical and that is the super power of music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, at least, i feel, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06756756757 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90996760078 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.2875494906 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223322730646 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795299108864 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648695662389 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119689832203 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047000969226 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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