Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music is an essential and important part of our life, just like a colorful puzzle gives this world happiness and joyfulness. Many individuals believe that it takes a leading role in connecting people together and gives them a chance to gain more understanding of each other. In my opinion, I definitely agree with that statement.
First of all, music is a special gift that God gave to everybody around the world, no matter what is their culture or religion. It is a springboard for people to know more about different nations and their cultural identities, in addition. For example, people in Vietnam or other Asia countries can freely enjoy Western music such as US & UK and expand their knowledge about Western culture as well. Furthermore, organizing several music concerts is also an effective way to give individuals from different countries an advantage to express themselves, be exposed to other cultures and transcend barriers to meet and make new friends.
Apart from that benefit, music also narrows the gap between generations. Both teenagers and the elderly can enjoy a song together and so that having a chance to get on with others more easily. Music helps boost our spirit and makes us feel more relaxing, it is also very useful in reducing our stress level in work or study. Therefore, thanks to music, we can be friendlier and behave more comfortably towards others. Furthermore, music is an ideal way to send significant messages about saving the world, fighting against Racism, domestic violence, child abuse or environmental problems such as global warming or greenhouse effects to everybody in every country on the Earth. It connects us together to make common cause to make a better place for our lives.
In conclusion, I believe that music is a wonderful way to heal our world and make us gain insight to each other. It is absolutely the greatest present that God gave to humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98125 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7385286229 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5228081262 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.266666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167736574983 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578825178461 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429022403593 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101665512314 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510683166456 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.