Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as posible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Prevalently, there are several debates among the way to deliver the valuable information. Several individual think that gather more informations are needed to make some improvement, while the remains considered that it is not the best idea to share that informations without getting any money from it. In thie essay, I will discuss about both views and give some examples.
To begin with, citizen are most likely to use the technology for finding some important data, they tend to find the easy and costless if it possible. For instance, in my University, the students try to use the library computers for finding some articles or journals because the University already subscribe to several websites. Besides, students also receive a lot of unusual information when they are surfing on the websites, nor wider their mindset of several issues.
On the other hand, researcher tend to use their right to protect the result and publish it on the safetier platform for earning some income from it. They usually redeem the money and allocate it for the budget in the next research project. So, they believe by submit the result paper on the payment website, it will be beneficial for them in the future.
In my opinion, give some donations for continue the research is the fantastic idea to do. Researcher need to keep finding new data, whereas the other utilize the outcome for created products or services.
In conclusion, we as the consumers need to be loyal for spend our money in the term to contribute the research activitiy and resulted more leading result, for the better future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0037593985 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59982180841 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7541581429 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.916666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190625858355 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723907462396 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494402669691 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103809688111 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615519461158 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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