Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Nowadays, entertainments are becoming necessities of human to get relief from the hustle and bustle a daily life, so watching movies play vital role in this. Some people claim that, smart phones are the best device to watch movie, while others argue that, in cinema people can enjoy more. This essay will examine the arguments on both favor and against of the topic.
To begin with, with the easy access of internet and smart phone, recently people are enjoying movie at home. The great advantage of watching films in smart phone, you can save money and time both. Similarly, you do not have to go through of hassle of purchasing ticket and you will not get message of “sorry tickets are sold out”. For Instance, Netflix, I flix, torrent is the great example, after the download of this application you can watch online movie free and some others movie which are release on online as well. Likewise, you can have pause and re-play option on your phone, so you do not have to miss your favorite part due to urgency work. Moreover, the great advantage of seeing films in smart phone, you can have family time and watch around with all family members those who cannot go to cinema hall like grandmother or grandfather.
On the other hand, visiting cinema hall can be the amazing refreshment to escape the busy schedule of daily life. This can help you get rid of the stress and incredible place for hang out with friends. For example, you can experience your awaited movie in big screen, high picture quality and amazing sound system with great atmosphere. Furthermore, it can be best place for socializing and child can learn social skills, such as, sharing, problem solving, making new friends. In contrast, you can enjoy 3D movie and animation in cinema hall, which is not available in smart phone and specially offspring will be happy by seeing favorite cartoon character in big size.
In conclusion, smart technology can help to save time and money and multitasking facilities at one device, while sometime hanging with friend and loved one in best place also necessary to make life more colorful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...ou can watch online movie free and some others movie which are release on online as we...
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Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'paused'.
Suggestion: paused
... online as well. Likewise, you can have pause and re-play option on your phone, so yo...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...h great atmosphere. Furthermore, it can be best place for socializing and child can lea...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...etime hanging with friend and loved one in best place also necessary to make life more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84254143646 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37567936526 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552486187845 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9820556938 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.866666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1333333333 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195102426094 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07318679921 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477450184756 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110119521388 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609155026951 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.