Some people say that now they can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some people say that now they can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is some dispute whether ones should watch movies on their smart devices or go to movie theatre. In my opinion, both ways have their merits and drawbacks which will be discussed below.
It is understandable why many opt for watching films on their handheld equipment. Given the availability of a large number of movies, the users may find it easier to find the genres which suit their taste. In addition to various selections, watching movies on either smartphones or tablets tends to be more convenient and comfortable. This is because it is not limited to the time and location which is fixed in traditional cinema premises. To illustrate, ones could induce their favorite movies at home, in their leisure time at work and rewatch them any time they desire for. Finally, spending on movies this way appears to be more affordable.
On the other hand, visiting to cinemas wold offer spectators with better experience, as long as a place to be sociable. Movies theaters often equipped with bigger screens, more advanced speaker system those are likely to provide audiences greater sense of joy. This has not mentioned that the most up-to-date blockbusters are commonly premiered before other platforms. Besides, either friends or families regularly choose film premises to gather where they have meaningful conversations.
In sum, watchers at home may benefit from the time-frame, numerous films available and where to see. However, cinema spectators may gain higher quality effects and spacious spot for meeting up.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ld equipment. Given the availability of a large number of movies, the users may find it easier to...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to film'
Suggestion: to film
...er friends or families regularly choose film premises to gather where they have mean...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, however, may, so, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19512195122 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6996155013 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670731707317 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4929056913 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151738967795 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514098627517 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350389865901 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916973564826 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137957805163 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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