Some people say that online courses are the most beneficial, while others believe traditional classrooms are more advantageous.
People are often conflicted on determining whether online classes are more advantageous or the traditional physical classroom based learning. Both these mediums have their own peaks, as some people prefer to learn in a strict routine while others flourish learning at their own time .
Online courses help people to learn at the time of their liking, which reduces the stress of not catching up on time. Moreover, as online classes are mostly recorded people are found to be less worried about taking notes or catching up with the teachers pace, but on the learning objectives. Furthermore, online courses are a boon for students living overseas as they can learn courses through professors in prestigious universities miles away without the hassle of moving in the country but learn in the comfort of their own household.
On the other hand, traditional classrooms are better in terms of student teacher interaction as they are suited well for classes with greater student involvement. Physical classes ensure people in the class are well involved in classroom activities and paying attention to the course materials rather than drifting away to some social media pages with turned on in the bockground. In addition, subjects involving greater intersections including art, music and even maths are nurtured in a physical class setting as the teacher can provide attention to everyone equally, which would be highly unlikely in class online classes.
In retrospect, both physical classes and online courses are beneficial in their own ways and depend widely on the course materials, nature of learning preferred and medium preferred. In my opinion, online classes can be more beneficial in the aspect that courses offered throughout the globe can be taken by a student in the comfort of their home while saying that the beneifits of the traditional classroom setting cannot be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27152317881 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69276999566 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5097839169 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.2 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313080144726 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12806751616 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676075845705 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195952857532 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638944768041 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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