Some people say in order to prevent illness, government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The interconnectedness of environmental pollution and housing problems has become a pressing concern for global health. While some advocate for prioritizing environmental clean-up and housing reforms, others believe that alternative approaches are more effective. This essay will examine both perspectives, arguing that a comprehensive approach that addresses both environmental and housing issues is necessary to ensure optimal health outcomes.
Investing in modern medical equipment, such as advanced diagnostic tools and treatment technologies, has significantly improved the accuracy and effectiveness of medical diagnoses and treatments. This has led to a reduction in the number of incorrect diagnoses and improved patient outcomes. Additionally, providing access to vaccines and other preventive measures, such as healthy diets and regular exercise, can help strengthen the body's immune system and reduce the risk of infectious diseases.
Environmental pollution, such as air and water pollution, can have a significant impact on health. Exposure to polluted air can lead to respiratory problems, while contaminated water sources can cause waterborne illnesses. To address these issues, governments should prioritize environmental clean-up measures, such as treating contaminated rivers and water bodies and implementing green spaces in urban areas. Additionally, poor housing conditions, such as cramped apartments with poor ventilation systems, can contribute to the spread of infectious diseases. To improve housing conditions, governments should prioritize the construction of more ventilated and spacious housing units, ensuring that citizens have access to safe and healthy living environments.
In conclusion, a comprehensive approach that addresses both environmental and housing issues is necessary to ensure optimal health outcomes. By investing in modern medical equipment, vaccines, and hospital upgrades, governments can improve the accuracy and effectiveness of medical diagnoses and treatments. Additionally, by addressing environmental pollution and improving housing conditions, governments can create a safer and healthier living environment for citizens. This approach not only improves individual health but also contributes to the overall well-being of the nation by reducing healthcare costs, increasing productivity, and improving the quality of life for all citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.34556574924 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3882274003 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525993883792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6111094699 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154767805676 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583616211019 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451701055123 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966287822433 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041390626905 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.32 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.55 12.4159519038 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.