Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people enjoy to spend thier lives doing the similar things and keeping off change, but on other aspact people belive that change is alway a benefit thing. In my opinion both these views have their advantage and disadvantage with each person. The following essay will analyze these stagements more clearly.
On the on hand, some teenagers who do the same things, avoid change and follow the majority are safer to their life. Living in the safety life take a distanse away from risk can help them fell happier and more comfortable. Furthermore, this opinion is very appropriate with older people who pass half of their life. Taking a lot of challenge when they were a teenager , so they afraid of change and just love peaceful in the end of their life. For intanstan, some management of businesses want to live in their hometown to enyoy their life live for themselves and relaxing when they get older. In some nagative aspact, youngs people who afraid to change proved that they do not creative depend on other people to living this is a bad habit of teenager for the growth of their country.
On the other hand, with people who think that change is always good things is a confident person. they braved to take new challenge, cope with the difficul things to be stronger and more independent. Moreover, they dare to change the similar things to improve themselves not only mentality it also include their physical health. For example teenager who study abroad have to far from their family and their friends but it is benefit for thier future. In addition, taking too risk challenge may have a terrible consequence to their life, It is very easy to catch at some start up nowadays.
To conclude, with older people spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change is a best chocie. In contrast to this with teenager who is the main energy of their nation need to change for help their country better, but they need a bright chocie of challenge not too risky to improve themselves better than before.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy spending'.
Suggestion: enjoy spending
Some people enjoy to spend thier lives doing the similar things an...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...analyze these stagements more clearly. On the on hand, some teenagers who do th...
^^
Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t of challenge when they were a teenager , so they afraid of change and just love ...
^^
Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'they're afraid'.
Suggestion: they're afraid
...hallenge when they were a teenager , so they afraid of change and just love peaceful in the...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nager for the growth of their country. On the other hand, with people who think...
^^
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ways good things is a confident person. they braved to take new challenge, cope with...
^^^^
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'includes'?
Suggestion: includes
...e themselves not only mentality it also include their physical health. For example teen...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to risk'?
Suggestion: to risk
...t for thier future. In addition, taking too risk challenge may have a terrible consequen...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to catch at some start up nowadays. To conclude, with older people spend th...
^^
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...days. To conclude, with older people spend their lives doing the same things ...
^^
Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... the same things and avoiding change is a best chocie. In contrast to this with t...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73011363636 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31766829422 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0332399849 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375916745689 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143134659239 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115903592619 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264666564657 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689108898047 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy spending'.
Suggestion: enjoy spending
Some people enjoy to spend thier lives doing the similar things an...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...analyze these stagements more clearly. On the on hand, some teenagers who do th...
^^
Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t of challenge when they were a teenager , so they afraid of change and just love ...
^^
Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'they're afraid'.
Suggestion: they're afraid
...hallenge when they were a teenager , so they afraid of change and just love peaceful in the...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nager for the growth of their country. On the other hand, with people who think...
^^
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ways good things is a confident person. they braved to take new challenge, cope with...
^^^^
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'includes'?
Suggestion: includes
...e themselves not only mentality it also include their physical health. For example teen...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to risk'?
Suggestion: to risk
...t for thier future. In addition, taking too risk challenge may have a terrible consequen...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to catch at some start up nowadays. To conclude, with older people spend th...
^^
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...days. To conclude, with older people spend their lives doing the same things ...
^^
Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... the same things and avoiding change is a best chocie. In contrast to this with t...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73011363636 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31766829422 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0332399849 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375916745689 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143134659239 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115903592619 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264666564657 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689108898047 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.