Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree?
Some people contend ARGUE that students do no not comprehend the labor market and schools should give them the opportunity to work monetarily while still studying academic materials. Personally, I strongly approve OF this idea and this essay will address the reasons for my view as follow.
First, the working world has not ever been one of children’s primary concerns compared to other interests such as RELATIONSHIP, entertainment, etc. A juvenile boy could be absorbed in a science fiction movie but it does not mean he would pay the same attention to the job of a technology scientist since they are two completely different aspects. As a matter of fact, that there are few or even no job-related subjects tantamount to young people not having necessary access to such a range of information. For all of these reasons, the difficulty figuring out what the workplace truly is that adolescents have nowadays is undeniable.
Hence, schools are to put in charge of changing to status quo as it is argued that letting the young work temporarily along with following the curriculum would resolve the problem. Getting involved early in the professional world helps teens gain some practical experience, which cannot be obtained within the school campuses. In return, students can apply what they are taught in practice and memorize them longer rather than rote learning. Yet it is worth KEEPING in mind that the child’s education should be top priority and joining the labor is just a prior measure so that the young will not be at a total loss when entering the workforce in the future.
To conclude, the young do have trouble perceiving the job market thoroughly and schools should take actions by giving them the opportunity to get familiar with the working life together with studying the academic content.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...ay will address the reasons for my view as follow. First, the working world has not eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, still, while, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0365448505 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73464915098 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637873754153 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.8426494276 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.818181818 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224565242321 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737002014502 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736803497087 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134431022825 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425906711385 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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