Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people believe that it would be more beneficial for big enterprises to change their location from urban centers to rural places. This essay will argue that despite the open space for construction, the lack of human resources and transportation difficulty means that the drawbacks far outweigh the benefits.
On the one hand, it is clear that locating factories in provincial regions would bring about one main positive aspect that is abundant space for building infrastructure. To illustrate, these areas are often sparely populated which results in a large body of ground not being put into use. Therefore, huge companies and industries could take full use of this without spending too much money and resource.
On the other hand, I believe that the disadvantages of this decision would prove to be more significant. First, moving from center area to the suburbs means the shortage of employees. Population in rural area is usually below average and would not meet the demand of giant companies for workers. Besides, the residents have had their own occupations as well and would not have interest in engaging in another job. Another detrimental effect is the challenges in transportation. Remote areas are not totally hard to reach, however, the traffic system development cannot compare to that of modern cities. Consequently, this would cost the enterprise a stupendous amount of money when it comes to shipping products and receiving materials also.
To conclude, although moving the location to regional places would bring huge factories and industries a great source of space for construction, it seems to me that the downside would be more important regarding lack of labor and undeveloped transport system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 737, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ipping products and receiving materials also. To conclude, although moving the loc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28727272727 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85986996179 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.443644551 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259927267597 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078426731869 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534069401915 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147421392315 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00970565177888 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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