Technology has been developing and we cannot exclude it from agriculture. Every day more and more advanced technology such as chemical fertilizer and machinery uses in agriculture and make significant changes from the past. These changes have advantages such as producing more food and disadvantages.
It is accepted that the population is increasing so, people need more food. Also, climate changes rapidly and farmers need crops and wheat which can grow in hard weather condition such as droughts. Advanced technology helps us in this situation. Farmers use chemical fertilizers for the purpose that plants, crops and wheat will grow faster, eradicate pests and tolerate poor weather condition. In addition, crops and wheat are collected by machine easier. By these two factors, farmers can plant crops and wheat not just once a year crops can be produced all year round. Due to more crops plant and collect, produce more food almost in all weather condition.
On the other hand, using advanced technology is not without negative effects. As it is clear from the name of chemical fertilizers, it is chemical and using more amount of it can cause disease in human. Furthermore, these chemical flow in the river and pollute water which causes water poisoning. While people try to not to produce greenhouse gas by using fossil fuel, agriculture machine uses fossil fuel which causes air pollution. And there are other disadvantages which can be numbered but most of them can be controlled for example by using enough chemical fertilizers or using filters to reduce the amount of greenhouses gas which produces by agriculture machine.
In conclusion, using advanced technology in agriculture has both positive and negative effects. As long as the negative effects are controlled, advanced technology has more positive effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30927835052 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76834785344 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505154639175 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2900413682 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8823529412 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0556393712401 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227150982541 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208019304046 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0387706091463 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124743099277 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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