A nation's culture indicates the way people have lived for a long time and the duty of each person is to protect this culture. These days the number of cities with tower and high rise buildings is increasing and it is within government's remit to make sure that new buildings are constructed well, However, this has no contrast with the style of the buildings. The new style of buildings can make cities eco-friendly and elegant.
The government always imposes statistic rules while by not setting these rules about the style of new buildings can not only help the style of buildings improve but also eco-friendly buildings can increase throughout the cities. In the past, traditional buildings did not have a structure to collect rain's water which can be used in drought season or for watering gardens and cooling but eco-friendly building by using some pipes collect rain's water and this makes a significant difference in the style of the building. Another reason that I can mention is illumination. More windows and glasses are used in new buildings to illuminate spaces with sun's light but some rooms used to have no windows in the past. These two main reasons are beneficial for the environment that the government can allow being done not only do force architects to build traditional buildings, but also encourage them to build more to preserve the environment.
In conclusion, the aim of the eco-friendly building is to preserve the environment. This can be done by the tendency of the government to encourage architects to build more eco-friendly buildings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01915708812 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84663242411 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494252873563 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.2982119847 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144930144401 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066754036995 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499161134608 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110022528775 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427518495133 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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