some people think that the advantages of advertising sports products through famous sports players outweigh the disadvantages. to what e do you agree or disagree.
Whether playing a sport that requires teammates or taking part in the non-teammate is better is a heated debate. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views.
Teams sport advocates have a great number of reasons to show that It is beneficial than the other. First of all, playing in a team could improve their ability to work in a group. For example, in basketball shooters would have a greater chance to succeed their throw if another member of their team is there to block his rival. Secondly, group games also enhance leader skill which is essential in works or big projects. The need to the victory of any team sports is a great leader. Therefore, when people joining these kinds of the sport they would have opportunities to hone their leading ability.
Meanwhile, sports, which you can go solo and teammate, is not required also have the benefit of their own. when playing with only one member people are able to freely give out decisions without the burden of teammates consulting. In addition, unlike football or volleyball, single-player do not have to carry their team along the way when they are falling behind.
In conclusion, both single-player sports and multiplayer sports have their own advantages and disadvantages such as enhance some special skills or burden of teammates. However, the pros of team sports seem to outweigh the counterpart, hence I believe people should take part more in these kinds of sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...red also have the benefit of their own. when playing with only one member people are...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...red also have the benefit of their own. when playing with only one member people are...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91393442623 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63841178416 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5090792962 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2307692308 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178938194534 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628109533605 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662751667642 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116203093402 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087070199408 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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