Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
It is agrued that all adolesence should be required to do unpaid work in their leisure time to support the local community, individuals think this would strength both the children and society as a whole. From my point of view, at some situation i mostly agree with this notion because its benefits for the social. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearence of modern technology that nowadays citizens are just concentrate in their occupation, so community work is hugely significant for the individual life. Not only can people potential life improve graduately, but also socioeconomic will be narrowed which increase the nation development. Furthermore, numerous experience can be transmited by the older generaion, providing a various of social knowledge and valuable information. To illustrate, there was a survey by Jodan Henderson, the famous scientist and professor which was about the success of postdraduates who join social activities. The statistic showed that nearly everyoun has got a plenty of achevements in their career.
However, we can not negate the drawback of this problem for the student. Many teenagers can not pay attention on their learning which reduce their score at university, and also some of them will be out of their energy, lacking the immune systerm. Moreover, some government take advantage of this revenue for their own profits. Harmful influence can be led by this action.
To conclude, by my agrument from the essay that i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some nagative aspect for the teenagers. The state need to have clear plans to advance the children for their economic improment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21223021583 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84547835395 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636690647482 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.446871744 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293391738778 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850178373733 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109639225806 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169294906381 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124129891682 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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