Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Numerous individuals tend to think that all university students are supposed to study something that they are fascinated to learn, nevertheless, others think that they are supposed to take a study which is going to be fruitful for later life, such as the studies related to science and technology. In accordance with this argument, this essay will explain both points of view and also put forward my perspective in the following paragraphs.
In regard to the statement above, some people urge that all people have to take a study on higher education which will render benefits to our future life. They thought that there are various functions of this effort. It, firstly, will render an improved enhancement to our technology and knowledge in the future. Secondly, the world is not going to obtain less benefits since all people focused on improving a better knowledge and technology.
Nonetheless, others believe that studying something that individuals liked, furthermore, is going to confer countless positive impacts as well. it, first and foremost, is capable of bestowing freedom to people to select something that they like. Regarding this statement, I do believe that by giving more opportunities to do what we preferred will make more positive outcomes instead of negative results. Second but not less crucial, it, additionally, is able to make people to feel more enjoying their time while they learned since they studied their preferred studies.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that both points of view have their own positive influence for us and the earth. However, I tend to think that giving freedom to people of choosing study that they are interested to learn is going to provide us more upsides rather than downsides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun benefits is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...fer countless positive impacts as well. it, first and foremost, is capable of best...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12237762238 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72077628632 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.290834583 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327540432692 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105136281042 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836877959275 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19121255836 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830511752524 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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