Some people think that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued by some people that children should be allowed to choose whatever they want like what they eat ,wear and watch. However, some opine that boundless liberty makes children selfish individuals.
On the one hand , it is important for children how to decide for their lifestyle and future career. Moreover, they can get the responsibility for their actions by this way. Also when they grow up, they can make their choices without any assistance. These children can deal with the conflicts and challenges in life more efficiently.
On the other hand, permitting children to do whatever they want without any boundary makes them self centered. These individuals do not care about other people even their family members. Therefore, parents should set the limits for their children in some cases. For example , a kid who watches cartoon whenever he or she wants, does not consider what others want to watch on television.
By way of conclusion, I believe that although children should be permitted to make their own choices, it is a vital task for parents to teach them how they can understand what is good or bad for them.
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- Some people think that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important 56
- Some people think that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95287958115 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56456271758 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623036649215 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6757063738 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233689738915 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949596750601 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485959587277 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145009489637 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296522270178 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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