"Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"
Road safety has inherently been a noticeable source of concern and sparked a significant level of debate worldwide. While some advocates argue that the most optimal approach to prevent traffic accidents is to raise the limit of driving age as it potentially enhances maturity, I staunchly believe the opposite. The drawbacks associated with increasing the driving age is heavily outweighing its benefits.
Opponents of raising the legal driving age might emphasize its beneficial outcome, prominently leading to traffic accident prevention. In particular, the levels of maturity correlative increase with age, as physical and mental development will reach its fullest potential after a certain age. This leads to more responsible manners when engaging in traffic activities and substantially lowers traffic accident rates. However, age is not the sole determinant of individuals’ maturity and responsibilities. A multitude of factors is also influenced road safety, including education, personal safety awareness, and law compliance, which significantly vary among individuals.
On the other hand, increasing the limit age for legally participating in traffic activities may lead to detrimental drawbacks in the long term, including increasing financial burden and independence infringement. Specifically, shifting the current legal driving age to a higher point will markedly increase the burden in many societal aspects, such as finance, commuting time, and effort. This approach also associates with invading personal independence and impeding self-development. Instead, there are other better strategies to be implemented, in the effort to enhance traffic road regulations. These comprise improving safety rules education, and providing much stricter punishments for driving offenses.
In conclusion, increasing the limit age for driving is not as efficient and appealing approach as it may seem initially, regarding the potential drawbacks associated with it. To minimize the drawbacks, including financial burden and liberty infringement, while maximizing road safety, optimal policies should be devised.
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- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, in conclusion, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07333333333 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26173096513 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2821077134 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.466666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207538198118 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712077486104 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425072128233 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134711226529 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303355259031 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.93 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.