Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traffic accidents is accountable for subtantial losses of valuable assets and hundreds of thousands of lives each year. To alleviate the impact of the phenomenon, some advocate the increased age for vehicles drivers. I some what disagree with the idea as it would spell trouble for people and society, albeit there are advantages associated with the solution.
Restriction on ages for operating cars and motorbikes may take a toll on personal and societal levels. It is common that cars or motorbikes are the main mode of transit of many young individuals. If these people are deprived of the opportunities to drive, their private lives are likely to be interuptted, rendering them unable to go to school, purchase necessities, and socilize with their peers. Additionally, preventing young drivers from participating in driving may be a prodigality of social resources. While young people can become qualified drivers of specialized vehicles, transporting passengers and goods, imposing limitation on the age of people who drive functional vehicles would disable a certain proportion of the workforce. This increases the cost of labor, exerting pressure on the work market.
Admittedly, the attendence of young vehicles users may have negative implications on people's safety. The major concern is that young minds tend to get involved in reckless driving behaviors namely speeding, drunk driving, disobeying traffic regulations. These inappropriate acts while driving, however, can be mitigated by either early trainings or educations to raise drivers' awareness of other people's well-being.
In sum, I mostly object to the raise of minimum age of drivers. Even though the application would reduce tragic outcomes young drivers have on the society, it causes problems for people's daily lives as well as wastes the manpower.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: somewhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51063829787 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97501457725 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8835400384 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210873513813 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708671734563 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462911597469 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120866136199 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555181693325 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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