Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university other believe that there are better ways to learn about business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is widely accepted that having tertiary education adds more value to a business however some opine that pursuing college degree is not imperative. I somewhat agree with need of tertiary education. It helps to understand key aspects of business and to make it renown at global level but these values can be added by just adding some experience. This essay pertains both views with suitable examples.
It is certain that having university education help people to land on global verge and excel in their field. Nowadays, most chunks moves to abroad to get a tertiary education in order to enhance their skills at international level according to global market. Furthermore, there is low risk of slow down of business because of resilient fundamentals after tertiary education hence repercussions get reduce. This is also being proved by many researchers that country with highest number of people with tertiary graduation is more successful.
Nevertheless, there are many other ways to make business more successful like individual may seek do’s and don’ts by experiencing the market. These days, teens without degree prefer to join a start-up in order to gain experience and look further to initiate their own venture. This has proven by many leaders for instance, Sir Mr. Dhirubhai Ambani started their journey being a servant at filing station because they do not have any degree. But with their hard work he started their own venture and its leading MNC among all top ventures.
To conclude, I agree with the notion that degree helps people to take stand in early days of their life with lessen efforts. However, in contrast, people without degree can also achieve the same growth with by hard work only.
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...he same growth with by hard work only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08833922261 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57906961808 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1617550809 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112508700591 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403913319746 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363626191826 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680704746929 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354845187266 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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