School teachers are more responsible for social an intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely accepted that the overall growth of learners depends on their mentors most of time. I somewhat agree with the notion because in this face pace world parents do not have ample amount of time to spend with their children as a result teachers help students to come out as a responsible person of the society.
The main reason why I believe the instructor could be a source of growth for children because in this era father and mother both are breadwinner and mostly occupied with their office work. Moreover, due to long working hours they may not have sufficient time for their children for their intellectual growth. In addition, pupils spent considerable time in schools and less effective hours at home where they either sleep or play.
Furthermore, nowadays, nuclear families are in trends where grandparents live far away from their children. But this is scientifically accepted that grandparents not even nurture them but also responsible for their overall growth. Consequently, mentor turns out as a sole responsible person for learner growth.
On the other hand, where teachers are being limited to the curriculum and do not focus on students growth hence parents ought to help them for enhancing their ethical fundamentals. Additionally, people ought to live with their parents because this is being often noticed that parents get the same results in future.
To conclude, I severely believe that due to time pressure parents might not give precious time for their children and by being living in nuclear family children are fully dependent on their mentors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e world parents do not have ample amount of time to spend with their children as ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...o responsible for their overall growth. Consequently mentor turns out as a sole responsible ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...d to the curriculum and do not focus on students growth hence parents ought to help them...
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Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'is' and 'being'.
Suggestion: is often being
...to live with their parents because this is being often noticed that parents get the same resul...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ticed that parents get the same results in future. To conclude, I severely believe that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04597701149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59824924427 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547892720307 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7905101272 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146321763669 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707460162768 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484875306126 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090626363487 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334468641731 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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