Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many a person holds the opinion that pronging jail sentences is the optimal method to lower the crime rates. Nonetheless, this is contradicted by other people, myself included, who espouse the notion that there are a number of different and replaceable approaches to decline criminal offences. These two opposing perspectives will be clarified below.
On the one hand, there are a number of different explanations to be taken into account as to why it is applicable to lengthen custodial sentences aimed at decreasing crime. For one thing, this might result in citizens incurring severer prison punishment by themselves. By and large, anyone takes illegal behaviors and intentions into consideration on the grounds that they would suffer a loss of freedom and waste a part of their invaluable lifetime in jail. For another, the fact that criminals are facilitated to be conscious of their offences thanks to prison wardens’ support deserves consideration. Prisoners are well re-educated and disciplined in prison terms, with the result that they are expected to turn into moral nationals after being released from prison.
On the other hand, it is my contention that the government could enforce other better substitutes for longer imprisonment sentences to drop criminal prisoners for several reasons.
To begin with, granted that the number of prisons and their facilities in each country is limited, criminals should be charged with other replaceable punishments like community services, suspended sentences along with self-re-education under the strict supervision of local policies and governments, to name but two. Another important factor for this is authorities reinforcing and increasing various methods to ensure security in residential communities. Given the fact that cameras and police spots are set up in every single road and corner, the policemen could track and identify gangsters and hooligans without difficulty.
In conclusion, I take the position that while to some extent it is feasible to apply prolonged prison judgement, there are a variety of other alternative methods to keep crime rates low for the reasons mentioned above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nonetheless, so, then, well, while, as to, in conclusion, by and large, for one thing, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5045045045 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99078595966 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618618618619 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7283211861 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135659685634 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460706077737 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457175830914 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853379637845 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349830156989 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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