Some people think that drug addicts should be treated as criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated as patients and sent hospitals.
Many people believe that the best punishment for drug addicts is being sentenced to jail. While this is acceptable, I believe it is fairer if they are hospitalized for a better option.
On one side, sending drug users to prison would cause a deterrent effect, reducing the number of perpetrators. They would be more considerate about their decision on consuming drugs if they do not want to spend their life in jail. A survey done by the FBI in 2019 toward the numbers of drug addicts in 50 states in the United States showed that lower drug consumers were found in the states that have the regulation of imprisoning drug addicts. However, this would not prevent the perpetrators from not taking drugs again after being released.
Nonetheless, having the addicts hospitalized would give them the chance to fully recover from the addiction which will prevent them from using drugs in the future. This is because most drug junkies are prone to have broken brain cells that caused the addiction. If this can be cured, they will have full control over themselves to live without drugs. A study done by NCBI in 2007 towards 500 rehabilitated drug addicts in Minnesota found that up to 98% of them had never touched drugs again since the last day of rehabilitation. I am convinced this school of thought is preferable to increasing the number of drug users.
To conclude, although imprisoning drug addicts would give them deterrent effects, nevertheless, this can not ensure those addicts to take another drug in the future. Rehabilitation in hospitals is preferable to make them model citizens again. Both options should be taken into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99275362319 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73284494692 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1708186984 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236912014578 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917083768434 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615028730185 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171065381502 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564725017832 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.