Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that people are entitled to gain entrance to college free of charge, regardless of their financial situations. This paper will prove that abolition of tuition fees may be counterproductive to students’ achievements, meanwhile student loans and scholarships can be ultimate alternatives to make college more accessible to the public.
There is a likelihood that providing costless college education has adverse effects on students. Due to the fact that a large proportion of students are made to pay for their schooling, they tend to be more serious about their studying and put great efforts to get better results. If they no longer have to meet this financial obligation, it is infinitely likely that they will be indifferent to schoolwork and lose their motivations for studying. For instance, students can play truant or skip examinations since they are aware that flunking a single exam costs them nothing. It’s evident that these behaviours will result in bad scores and students cannot benefit from education.
Instead of using government subsidy to pay for college fees, I believe that the authorities should offer students who cannot afford their schooling low-interest loans. This liabilities will motivate them to devote themselves more to their studying to have higher GPA, and this certainly plays pivotal role on their job seeking after graduation to pay their debts. Furthermore, scholarship depending on academic results should be granted to the elite students. Those who receive financial support will have to remain their top-ranked positions to keep obtaining the grants, because low scores will put an end to their scholarships.
In conclusion, the government should avoid education subsidy as well as make it free for everyone, as loans and scholarships will be viable solutions to make schooling more affordable and guarantee polished performance of students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47811447811 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99541457468 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7452666646 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.583333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170483891984 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658081694264 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389244104606 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111698243305 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220050500347 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.