Some people think that giving aid to poor countries has positive effects, while others believe that international aid should be stopped. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although in today's world, the global economy has developed for a long time, there are many countries suffering from poverty. Some people argue international aid should be abandoned. Personally, I disagree with this idea for following reasons.
The financial aid given by rich countries can not only be beneficial for the educational improvement and medical care in poor countries, but also create lots of jobs to decline the unemployment rate. It is not difficult to imagine a terrible situation in developing countries in terms of education and medical care. Thus, it is the international aid from developed countries that can contribute to offer high quality service in schools and hospitals. Moreover, due to the depression of domestic economy, many people find it hard to find a descent job in poor countries. It is acknowledged that some international aids such as financial aid could change the economic situation by establishing more factories and businesses. Accordingly, many local people may benefit from the jobs created by the new factories. Therefore, it is reasonable to say that international aid to help poor countries indeed should be encouraged.
Admittedly, I am not denying that some negative effects would generated from these international aids. That is to say, many local people may enjoy the products or services from other countries help more rather than improving their life quality by working hard. This, consequently, could prevent their economy from a sustainable development. However, this issue may be a minor factor in comparison with the positive effects resulting from international aids.
To sum up, although international aids may cause local people rely on the financial help, damaging to the sustainable economy development, it could bring more benefits to poor countries, such as better education and more job opportunities. Thus, it is reasonable that developed countries offer international aids to poor countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, such as, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46381578947 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12895006584 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6723536341 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251054953608 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993149767663 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859010349204 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16144674738 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434076648779 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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