Some people think that giving aid to poor countries has positive effects, while others believe that international aid should be stopped. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary society, it is not an uncommon phenomenon that better-off countries send millions of relief goods to other countries in desperate need. Some people are convinced that there are more banes in doing so than boons to both the. Personally, I strongly consent to it. beneficiaries and the subscribers
On one hand, subsidized on a regular base, the recipients, particularly those universally and historically claimed poverty-stricken areas such as some in Africa, tend to cease to struggle to survive. How pathetic are these countries, which may gradually become used to accepting assistance without making any spontaneous efforts. In the long run, they will be eventually deprived of the capability to live on their own.
On the other hand, these generous countries may also pay a heavy price for what they do, which is largely due to the fact that the insatiability of human wants will put them under not only crippling financial burden but also excessive international pressure. For those openhanded governments who nonetheless fail to guarantee the well-being of their own people, the inconsiderate deed is very likely to spark hostility in their people and thus shake the domestic stability and hinder the economic development.
Admittedly, there exists one distinct benefit in the heroic behavior—to help those needy countries out. But unfortunately many countries do so with intentions that the strengthened bond between them will pay off in cases of emergency or crisis in such a complex and highly-changeable political, economic and natural climate. To their disappointment, this possibility can be easily ruled out as nations would take measures only for their own interests.
To sum up, international aid has certain moral merits, which, however, according to what is mentioned above has long been overrated; therefore, it is more advisable that developed countries offer techniques and talents to help the underdeveloped to maintain sustainable development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4983713355 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2425626212 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654723127036 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7161859303 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14740152472 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466495998158 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273197957005 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755047640103 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200926650217 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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