Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that the government finance would rather not be used for encouraging art and cultural activities while the others believe that it is significant to sustain the funding due to its benefits to our inhabitants and the sophistication. This thesis will deliberate both points of view but eventually acquiesces in the idea of financing art and culture which is more advantageous.
Some people deliberate that it is iniquitous and unnecessary to support art and culture while there are more serious problems needed to be elucidated such as environmental degradation, redundancy and poverty,… Moreover, the government should initially concentrate on their citizens conditions, using welfare to improve the individuals’ life.
However, it is irrefutable about the emphasis of art and cultural heritage in our society. For example, aesthetic buildings, attractive historical stories and interesting cultural activities have magnetized tourists from within and outside the country, whose spending, in turn, boosts the economy. On the other hand, art and cultural activities also play an essential role in social cohesion. It comprises both materialistic and spiritual values which strengthens the community. Throughout history, it is clear that artistic works and cultural destinations such as Mona Lisa, the statue of Venus, HaNoi, Paris,.. have attracted so many visitors from all over the world which also contributes to the revenue of each country.
In conclusion, despite all the disagreements I strongly subscribe to the advantages of art and culture. The government should involve more in the work of promoting art and cultural heritage.
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- Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.688 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18505510156 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.655373387 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.272727273 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290926981287 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918859094483 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684390233425 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168870590843 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508481422998 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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