Some people think money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
Currency is considered as an essential element for happiness in our life. However, the question is whether the people can live willingly without earning much money or not. I strongly believe that money and happiness are discrepancy features after all.
First of all, it is irrefutable that money is required to purchase from materialistic objects to forms of entertainment, from daily meals to extravagance items. Moreover, it has played a major role in some individuals’ lives. Our critical survival requirements must surely be met before we lead to a pleasant life. It is uncomplicated to figure why a person cannot be ecstatic without earnings.
On the other hand, I believe that money has nothing to do with exhilaration. Although a certain amount of money is necessitated to maintain a life, the more incomes we have doesn’t mean the more contentment we can acquire. Happiness is hard to defined yet we all have our own particular passions from which we take pleasure. Some of us may find enjoyment in playing sports or participating in other outdoor activities while others believe that being healthy, keeping a close connection with friends and family are the most significant characteristics of all. I personally think that as long as we appreciate the value of life and have a sense of purpose, we could be more delightful than we have ever been.
In conclusion, I believe that it is imperative to full fill our basic needs such as food, accommodation, medication,... However we should also wisely consider what is the determination of finding our ways to the existent happiness, by answering that question, we will not chasing for the value of money anymore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, after all, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1155234657 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15958939135 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5789910079 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216472577362 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074283902438 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529207403062 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131632379734 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786334920296 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.