Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is disagreed that government has a responsibility for the increase of overweight children related to taxes. However, parents are responsible to cope with this issue in kids due to the relationship.
Today, it is admitted that authority should respond to reduce the high rate of obese children because of country obligation in terms of taxes. That is to say, the amount of money paid by individuals is allocated on public health insurance, being a claim for health welfare to solve the overweight problem of kids. For example, most of all boys and girls in the UK had a tendency to suffer from obesity in 2018, so that National Health Service obligated to conduct a real-time medical checkup by using national insurance from tax revenues, then it results they are now not worry of obesity symptoms.
Nevertheless, instead of government obligation, it is believed that obesity is a physical disease, which may be dealt by parental control due to the power of relationship. This is because when they have a tight bond, family is more able to monitor the nutrition in diets of their children. For instance, by benefiting the closeness, the vast majority of Indonesian fathers and mothers persuade their sons and daughters to consume healthy foods consisting of vitamins and low fat, being a part of weight loss treatment. Therefore, it is an agreement that family members have to act responsively to look after the weight of children as a reason of their bonding.
In conclusion, it is agreed that this health incident is not only the national regulator responsibility, but also it is probably tackled by parents. Where possible, country and citizens should be in cooperation to create a reduction of obese children percentage.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05574912892 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93956908757 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3123808237 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.909090909 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207515095654 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798033299709 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740433892803 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129956457478 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559541292172 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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