Some people think that government should invest in arts and cultural events.others think that government should invest money on more important things.
The ultimate goal of modern government is to ensure rapid progress, safety and advancement of their nation. In this contemporary epoch, majority of masses believe that, a hefty sum of money should be invested by the regime on the progress of art and cultural events. By contrast, others are of the opinion that, spending money on other imperative fields must be the priority of higher authorities. Here , I would like to throw light on both the views with my own perception.
An ample number of points can be considered to shore up the former view. First and foremost, investing money on the promotion of art and cultural events is the need of an hour to prevent the cultural heritage of a nation. To demonstrate, in thriving nations people are under the influence of affluent countries lifestyle and also adopting the style of eating, wearing and living standards of western countries. Simultaneously,they forgetting their own ritual and customs . Moreover, the organization of art existing by the financial assistance provided by the administration emerge the value of art in native countries citizen . Consequently, investigation money on art and cultural events is anticipated to be a worthwhile idea to induce folks towards their art and cultural heritage. On the other hand, opposite wind is also there.
Firstly, the problem of unemployment, health disorders and starvation is spreading its roots worldwide so spending finance on such field's should be on the priority list of administration in order to mitigate this worrying problems. Besides this, as trade, tourism and businesses network worldwide plays an indispensable role to boost the economy of a region. Therefore the role of investigation on such field's is terrific in order to bring prosperity in a nation.
In my notion, both sides have their own valid grounds. Undeniably , it is necessary for higher authorities to invest money on art and cultural sector to prevent the roots of cultural heritage. However, it is the main responsibilities of regime to spend finance on other fields for the development of a nation . Thence, executive authorities should have to adopt a balanced, logical and regional approach during allocation of money to distinct sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23463687151 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1064292171 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539106145251 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2931819793 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241380978079 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647335300851 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706683136504 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137088868554 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649405531969 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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