Education is more or less a necessity in this modern era, some are of the opinion that the entirety of an individuals education should be financially backed by the government, other believe that higher education shouldn't be funded by the government rather by the effort's of the students. The below essay will discuss both views and express my opinion.
To begin with, many developed countries have made primary and second education free for their country, furthermore, this has evidently shown a gradual increase of educated personal withing a society, For example, Canada and Germany have one of the highest literacy rate amongst other developed countries. This could be contributed to the comprehensive and free education provided by the government. The number of students who opt-in for university education have also seen a drastic increase, as they are more likely to perceive higher education. By performing better academically they could even grab a scholarship to their university education, thereby, the entirety of their student life could be funded by the government.
on the other hand, university education is said to be more difficult than your average high school diploma, hence, it should only be offered to the elite of the students, who can actually contribute to the society, therefore, by making university education expensive and by limiting the scholarship offered we can filter out the elite who are more likely to succeed. For instance, Harvard university have intentionally increased their fee structure. This would promote a hierarchy of students who would put in relatively more effort in their academics to obtain a scholarship to the university. Additionally, this has increased the number of graduates in the university who have an overall GPA of more than 75% in their university education.
To conclude, in my opinion university education should be granted to only those students who portray their efforts on their marks-sheet. Making it free for all would have no benefits in the long run, as this would abolish the competitive world of education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... of the opinion that the entirety of an individuals education should be financially backed ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...nt, other believe that higher education shouldnt be funded by the government rather by t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...e could be funded by the government. on the other hand, university education is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, more or less, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29518072289 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93284417837 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503012048193 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.5731341 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275476797233 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108794440013 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591781993773 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188101830516 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571641725695 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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