Some people think history has nothing or little to us but other think that styfyung past history can help us better understanding the present .discuss two views and give your opinion.
Although it is considered by few masses that history is unusual in the present era yet other group contradicted former statement and believe through the history generation can become more veteran. I think history play a crucial role for surviving in the present and I intend to discuss the both arguments in the upcoming paragraphs.
Due to several reasons, many people are not interested in history as it is clear seen that it is technical era and stiff competition is there in the society for getting lucrative jobs and, obviously industries hire those personalities who are experienced in technology. Consequently, parents also prefer to chose subjects regarding computer science that their children can earn greener pasture as well as spend their lives lavishly.
Alternatively, numerous people preferred to read history along with other subjects. As it has discuss in the above paragraph that world become global village. Owning to technology, and youth just cramming everything related to computer field instead of learning basic which is important to clear all the muddles behind the concept. However, in the big company mostly seek for basic questions from the candidate, and because of the divide of basic knowledge they have to lose that golden opportunity.
To conclude, after analysing both statements, according to my believe whether other subjects play a significant role in the society. But history also important along with them.
- Do you support that nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes 68
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Other thinks that it is better to work for different organisations. 61
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Other thinks that it is better to work for different organisations. 61
- The charts show the percentage of water used for different reasons in six areas of the world. 67
- Consumer goods have become the most important part of lives. Do you advantages outweigh the disadvantages 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...read history along with other subjects. As it has discuss in the above paragraph t...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'discussed'.
Suggestion: discussed
...ry along with other subjects. As it has discuss in the above paragraph that world becom...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...lysing both statements, according to my believe whether other subjects play a significa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, regarding, so, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35371179039 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8239536896 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64192139738 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4564648375 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177174604935 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679510301401 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612160187852 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10248130174 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706821948187 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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