Consumer goods have become the most important part of lives. Do you advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Today's era is a consumerist one. Consumer items have gained significant importance in our lives. In this essay, i will shed a light on the merits and demerits of this phenomenon in upcoming paragraphs.
On the positive side, consumer goods boots the economy and standard of living. The life becomes more luxurious and comfortable. In addition to that, the company requires more employees to meet the growing demand and thereby increasing the work opportunities. Further, these items saved person's time. For instance, people use a computer to buy the products from various sites such as Amazon, mantra and so on instead of spending time for driving to malls and stores. In addition, advanced goods make communication much easier and affordable between people. To cite an example, masses can use a mobile phones chat or video conferencing software to keep in touch with other masses. They pay least cost as compare to the past. Therefore, consumers are proper utilize the benefits of these products.
On the flip side, people forget their moral and human values. They become materialistic, don't give any importance to relations. Items such as computer, car, cell phone and so on that make person materialistic. Also spend more time on these types of goods. It will bring additional tension as well as stress, thereby affecting the mental status of the health. For example, the overuse of mobile phone lead to neural disorders becuase it emits radio waves that affect the neuron. Moreover, people also take financial debts to purchase various products such as latest smart phone, 3D screen television or expensive cars. As a result, a person will lose frugality. Furthermore, adulteration in food items that impact on the human health. For instance, if people eat food that mix with harmful adulterants then they suffer from several problems such as food poisoning.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that merits of consumer products on people's daily lives outweigh the drawbacks; consumer good can save a person's time and enable easier communication with other people but use their good in limit period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...importance in our lives. In this essay, i will shed a light on the merits and dem...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'pay the least'.
Suggestion: pay the least
...o keep in touch with other masses. They pay least cost as compare to the past. Therefore,...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...uman values. They become materialistic, dont give any importance to relations. Items...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16081871345 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70022392793 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0964902629 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7391304348 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8695652174 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.60869565217 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12220504806 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337504418745 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620461924006 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904243592815 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454293792844 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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