Some people think that history is one of most important schools subject. other think that in today world subject like science and technology more important than history. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
It remained controversial issues whether subject of past are most important or advance technological courses. Public opinion toward this situation is divided some consider history is vital but other argued that science subjects having more place in education. In the following essay will discuss both views of argument in detailed.
According to many history course is most essential during studies because it provide insight of the stages of humanity. In addition each region having its own history which rooted in civilizations and traditions of that country. Although history take to that world where our ancestral live their live either in majesty or slavery but also lesson we learn from that period. For example World war made huge destruction not only of humans but also other creatures and infrastructure. Therefore, from that history internationally many peace councils have been established to deteriorate the tension between countries. And schools are best place to teach them negative effects of wrong decision had made in past and prospective results and remedies.
On the other side conjecture opinion observed by people with advanced thoughts because from their point of view development of outlook towards discoveries. The technology courses are necessary instead of memorizing history new intervention are better. Although these subjects are very interesting which related to today world but also leads to new advancement in that field. A research down by Cambridge University that students who apt for science subject were more balanced thoughts than courses like literature or history. In this way new invention and discoveries solved many mysteries of life from development of treatment for diseases to comfort in each walk of life.
In this essay we discussed the opinion of both side whether history or science most vital. Although both fields having its own importance but in my opinion science is more essential than subject related to past. Which have no special connection with present and future I always detest this subject during my studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4012345679 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76136440258 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58950617284 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1133808367 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.941176471 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333247489424 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973811014671 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754645438621 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211516771625 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846262969679 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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