Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, hosting an international sports event can be seen as controversy. Some people reckon that it is beneficial for the country whereas others perceive it as disadvantageous. In my opinion, it brings benefits for the country as long as the government implements the sustainable management.
One predominant reason that hosting an international sports event can bring benefits to one country is that it boosts the economy of that particular country. Being the host of a well-known and enormous sports event meaning there are definitely many people visiting the country in that period of time, particularly candidates from other countries coming to participate in the event, not to mention a huge number of visitors and tourists coming along to cheer their candidates up or just simply want to attend in a fascinating event. In other words, more people require more accommodation, more restaurants and cafes and more entertainment facilities. Clearly, more employment opportunities are created. Therefore, people in the host country, in particular tourism and hospitality industry, are making more money, hence the host country benefits from it all.
On the other hand, if this is not managed carefully and responsibly by authorised people, hosting an international sports event can leave the host country and its individuals with devastating consequences. One significant and recent example of this can be seen in Qatar as the host of World Cup 2022. Being the host country, Qatar needs a lot of labourers. As a result, labour migrants from nearby countries has come to work as there is no and inadequate job opportunities in their own countries. This is supposed to be a benefit for both the host country and its individuals as well as other people. However, labourers in Qatar are facing economical, social and health problems as they are receiving no payment, delayed payments, working in unsafe conditions without proper PPE - personal protective equipment and facing sanitary issues. Little progress has been carried out to protect migrant workers by Qatar's authorities. This is due to the lack of administration and responsibility of authorised people which leads to those problems.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I would agree that hosting an international sports event brings advantages to the host country, but the subsequence of the lack of responsibility in labour management can be substantially significant. To maximise the benefits of hosting a large sports event, government and authorised staff should pay more attention to what happening and put more efforts in solving the problems before the situation gets worse that it gets international notice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...any people visiting the country in that period of time, particularly candidates from other cou...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... countries has come to work as there is no and inadequate job opportunities in the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...aximise the benefits of hosting a large sports event, government and authorised staff ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37857142857 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15253715757 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.1821229421 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220963289718 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765466973099 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535044997494 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156746517198 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531460027065 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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