Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Some advocate the view that it is benifitial for the host nation of a world-wide atheletic competition while others believe that holding such events may be problematic by several financial and social drawbacks may occur. The following essay will examine both sides of the issue prior to my own opinion being expressed.
For the most part, international sports event have been a phenomenon that can effectively boost one country’s tourism to another level. Firstly, hundred of thousands people will be expected to board in the hosting location to witness such sensational competitions and induldge themselves in exploring an exotic culture. It is the economy that will be significantly contributed along with the most positive impressions will be presented to the rest of the globe during the event. Secondly, if it hadn’t for broadcasting purposes of the games, the organizers would not have achieved a lucrative income from commercials and advertisement. So advantageous are the altheletic events that the countries wish to host must be strictly qualified in terms of infrastructure and human resources.
At the mean time, organzing a highly anticipated sports event may be a double-edged sword with specific underlying challenges regarding finance and the exposure of negative sides of society. With many meticulous qualifications to ensure, the organizer have to invest a grand amount of money on constructing new facilities such as stadiums, halls and arenas which they can hardly afford. It could be an unnecessary burden which amplifies the existing finacial pressure. As the positive side being ostentagiously shown, the negative aspects may also be exposed internationally such as poverty, segregations and political unstability. A prominent instance is that most of the incharge nations have received harsh criticism from publicity for abundantly spending years of people’s tax to for the sake of short term competitions instead of adressing their internal hurdles.
In conclusion, hosting an international sposts event is noticeably profitable in many aspects as long as the country’s resources are in an appropriate status, otherwise it may cause serve repercussions that overshadow the foreseen benifits. To the best of my knowledge countries should exert their efforts to deal with the existential challenges prior to embark on holding atheletic competions on a global scale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ed. For the most part, international sports event have been a phenomenon that can e...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ry’s tourism to another level. Firstly, hundred of thousands people will be expected to...
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Line 7, column 374, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l challenges prior to embark on holding a atheltic competions on a global scale.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54076086957 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19900440672 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60597826087 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2618797124 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.642857143 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203439209888 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642365476249 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464870846519 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122917459274 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279315377461 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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