Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, with the rising of globalization, every country has an oppoturity to host international sports event. While some people believe that such events will harm the nation. I would argue that hosting a global sports event would do more good than bad.
On the one hand, there is a reason why hosting an international sports event is not a good ideal for a nations. As we well known, a global event require vast expenses from the host country. This is because an international event needs an appropriate investment and it consumes a gigantic amount of resoursces of the nation for preparation activities such as: operation, media and administration. Thus, the government expenditure during this time will rise. If the host nations did not manage well, it could triggered rise in civil unrest.
On the other hand, I believe the hosting of an international sports event will bring up valuable opportunities for the host country. Firstly, this is a good chance for the nation branding gain in popularity. Thus, increase the rate of which people around the world to recognize that nation and its traits; namely cuisine, folk costume, culture and traditions. Secondly, hosting a global sports event also stimulates economic growth of the nation. By gainning wealth from tourists during the events and attracting foreign investments, the government can sought this opportunity to reduce unemployment rate. Thus improve the economic status and moreover, the life expectancy of its people.
In conclusion, there is a downside which a nation should consider before deciding to host an international sports event. However, I believe that such event could benefits the country more than what it takes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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...ity to host international sports event. While some people believe that such events wi...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'trigger'
Suggestion: trigger
...t nations did not manage well, it could triggered rise in civil unrest. On the other...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t could triggered rise in civil unrest. On the other hand, I believe the hosting...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...owever, I believe that such event could benefits the country more than what it takes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24175824176 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88490782866 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556776556777 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7764022957 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237601425303 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869811338335 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631594735608 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163223954115 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451841114793 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.