Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Many people claim that hosting an international sports event is beneficial for the country, while others’ points of view, such events pose a negative effect. I believe that there are both sides to the argument.
Firstly, organizing an event may go with potential in media that may draw enormous crowds. The government just wants this to happen to get good advertising in their country so that many other countries can recognize the power in their economies and possibly to get more united with them. Also, towards traveling, when the tourists come to the country to watch the event, they would probably visit that country also. If they feel excited about its cultural, scenic spots or the food they can come back in some days, it can perhaps support to get a rocket in economies. Therefore, this is a great opportunity according to the countries which can have several benefits.
On the other hand, there is no denying that matters arising can occur during host an event. Firstly, the money that they invest into the event is enormous, that would be a risk for some area which don’t have a fine packet. Also, there would need to be a huge of humans to prepare for this event, and have an employer who can launch this scheme without any bad consequences happen is not an easy one. In addition, because this is a really outstanding event and the number of people who care about this event is not small. Therefore, the government needs to ensure some people want to corrupt through kickback or dubious dealings not occur. In addition, the locals may be affected by the noise of constructing process as the life quality is able to decrease.
In conclusion, if the government can ignore the negative side of hosting an event and accept to do it. Afterward, it would be beneficial and compensate the risk
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... they would probably visit that country also. If they feel excited about its cultura...
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Line 3, column 758, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s the life quality is able to decrease. In conclusion, if the government can ign...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75796178344 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50192834064 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557324840764 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9289951921 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253043060005 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796151446924 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067621540161 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164033792131 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869096081865 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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