Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is often undeniable that sports have become the most prevalent occasion that could bring people around the world together, so it is easy to understand why hosting these events is beneficial for some countries, while others think the drawback of it outweighs the advantage. This essay would discuss both views.
First of all, although events are a great opportunity for some countries to create a relationship with others, there are still some significant challenges are waiting for them. Firstly, the security issues are the most noticeable daresay for the government. This problem could be increased the percentage of crime rate such as burglaries and robberies when a country organizes an event such as the world cup. Otherwise, this is a gold time for them since the police are focused on this enormous occasion. Secondly, the process of preparing frequently demanding. For instance, in the world cup 2014, it took Brazil five-year ready for the industries, constructing various facilities, and the profit investment to this.
On the other hand, the international sports events could be impacted some detrimental effect; However, we may not deny the great benefits that brings for a country. Commencing with, this is a perfect time to advertise the traditional, festival and perform the national anthem for the world. In addition, it is time to ease the fatigue and expectation of people, everyone could reunite and enjoy the warm atmosphere of hosting the world cup or other events. This is also a playground that athletes from the host country have the opportunity to express themselves and bring home medals for their hometown.
In conclusion, although sports events ought to face immediate problems, the benefit of it is tremendous for the hosted country. In my opinion, host nations could also consider sharing this event with a neighboring country to spread the risk and enjoy the lucrative long-term benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21290322581 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78729091319 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7083480159 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3571428571 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275872354371 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840476113441 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668091725361 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172725756159 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056081781623 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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