Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country,
while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is asserted by some people that conducting an international sports event will benefit the host country. On the other hand, critics say that those events would be a waste of budget and should be better spent. Despite the evident merits it brings to the society, I would concur with the latter notion for the profound drawbacks of large sport festivals.
For one thing, such events provide opportunities for the country to enhance the image of cultural identity and bolster economic prosperity. From a cultural perspective, sports aspirants around the globe as well as domestic visitors will gather to join in the dynamic environment in which high sporting spirit is promoted. Hence, this is advantageous for the locals to uphold their value through advertising and selling traditional commodities and cuisines. In the meantime, the tourism industry will grow significantly owing to the increasing demand for traveling to the country where the event is held and businesses could boost sales when people are willing to pay more for recreational activities on such occasions.
For another, the shortcomings are subtle which wield perennial negative influence on the host nation in the long run. Firstly, the cost for maintaining sport amenities is substantial in comparison with the profit derived from ticketing. The investment in sports facilities aimed at professional athletes is a financial constraint and a pressing problem for the authorities given the vast amount of the equipment are only used temporarily. The disparities between the turnover and resources allocated often accompany offshore investment for labor cost to construct stadiums and build other facilities considered as national loans, which the chosen country will have to endure for years later. Furthermore, with the massive number of tourists across the globe combined in a region, this could give rise to potential infectious diseases which exert adverse health impacts on the public. For instance, the proportion of Covid-19 patients has risen significantly in Korea after the Olympic games ended. This will weigh more on the medical system of the host when the pandemics break out due to the uncontrolled number of spectators assembling in one particular place and provoke the spread of diseases.
To conclude, regardless of the existing economical and cultural benefits, I still hold the opinion that those could be facilitated by other ways. Nonetheless, the downsides are more considerable, requiring additional attention to be resolv
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-09-26 | nle.hngoc | 56 | view |
| 2023-07-11 | llrasthy J | 84 | view |
| 2023-07-07 | Kiwi | 56 | view |
| 2023-02-14 | Kiwi | 73 | view |
| 2023-02-05 | hi.nguyn91 | 89 | view |
- During the 20th century contact between different parts of the world developed rapidly thanks to air travel and telecommunication To what extent do you agree that societies benefit from the increased contact and closer relationships with foreigners brough 78
- There are different methods businesses use to increase their sales What are the different ways companies use to increase sales Which one is the most effective 67
- The bar chart shows the number of visitors to four London museums 73
- The diagram shows how chocolate is produced Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 11
- Scientists believe that by studying the behavior of 3 years old children people can predict if that child can become a criminal in the future To what extent is crime a product of human nature Is it possible to stop children from growing to be a criminal 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, nonetheless, so, still, well, for instance, as well as, for one thing, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44387755102 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92102419379 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6951674225 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.375 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192024579174 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611993523729 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768416515733 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110556264364 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670678209813 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.