Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are more successful.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
It is argued by a number of people that individuals’ wealth is the most significant factor to determine success. However, the opponents claim that this concept is represented by those who contribute to the sake of the society. I would concede that the latter lays a solid foundation to the definition of success.
Admittedly, the desire for a good material life quality has instilled in the public certain prejudices and criticism about personal achievements based on the level of wealth. It is prevalent that in these days, individuals’ image of professionalism and luxury is likely to accompany their achievements. For instance, an illustrious billionaire will be generally regarded as a successful person according to his company’s lucrativity and influence on the market. Undoubtedly, the result-oriented society will consider this group as a role model of success due to what they have obtained and their greater sense of satisfaction about life. After all, being financially free to afford a pleasurable life condition is the fundamental need of each person, which is the reason for the advocates of this view.
For another, I believe that those who pursue meaningful outlets should be regarded as the definition of success owing to their contribution to society. Human progress, however, is unable to continue without the involvement of knowledgeable individuals such as teachers and researchers, both of which carry the duty to enlighten and gear the others toward a better life. This group does not derive material gratification from their jobs but the personal joy from the full exercise of their abilities. Yet, from a psychological perspective, this could be regarded as a form of satisfaction when people do it for passion and find true achievements behind their success that generate value to the others.
To conclude, although both views have some certain validity, I believe that one’s ability to shape the world should be held in higher esteem for its foundational merits to our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, after all, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31152647975 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14450452322 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582554517134 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5692987281 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.153846154 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174775432922 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653669509475 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520619604545 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111953442493 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691249366667 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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