Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Sporting events have been part of people’s life across the world. While I believe that if a country holds this global-scale sporting event, it can come up against some difficulties. There are a number of benefits, both financial and cultural.
One the one hand, the considerations that are obvious are the costs for preparation and concerns about safety. First, it is apparent that in order for the event to take place, the venue must be made ready and it is easy to see that the money spent on the construction of stadiums which can accommodate thousands of people at one time, the facilities for different types of games, may amount to an exorbitant amount. Another major worry is the potential dangers which may happen any time as spectators gather in large numbers. There are always members of opposition groups, gangsters out there waiting for a chance to cause trouble. As a matter of fact, there are many cases of violence at sporting scenes all over the world. However, with careful planning and strict safety regulations, these two problems can be alleviated.
One the other hand, more money and cultural exchange can be the two noticeable merits to hosting an event for people worldwide. The first benefit can be easily seen as there are always fans of some sportspeople who are willing to pay extravagantly to see their idols play their games, near or far. Those people are usually very generous and for them money is no object. Besides them, there are many others who may not want to spend as much but when they come to the host country, they have made valuable contributions. Not only do these people benefit the country economically, but they also bring their culture in contact with the country they come to. For these people, they do not come to a country to just watch the sports, they tend to spend time travelling around, talking to the locals and experiencing the differences in terms of customs and traditions. By talking and sharing with them, the people in the host country can also learn about their visitors’ culture, which makes cultural exchange happen.
In summary, there are certainly difficulties in getting prepared for a large scale sport event, but such problems can be lessened and the advantages can easily surpass the shortcomings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, while, in summary, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79274611399 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51477952983 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512953367876 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 386.0 20.2975951904 1902% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1850.0 106.682146367 1734% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 386.0 20.7667163134 1859% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 87.0 7.06120827912 1232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223957444365 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223957444365 0.084324248473 266% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142930991776 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707920008481 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 194.1 13.0946893788 1482% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -311.85 50.2224549098 -621% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 152.7 11.3001002004 1351% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.98 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.89 8.58950901804 301% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 156.4 10.1190380762 1546% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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