Whether hosting an international sports event is good for the country or not, is a controversial topic. From my perspective, although this will bring about both benefits and drawbacks, the positive sides will outweigh the negative one.
There are two reasons not to support one nation organising global sporting competitions. First of all, it may increase the tendency of violent and criminal behaviors. Since a great number of fans will go to the stadium to cheer the athletes, thieves may have high chance to sneak in the crowd, which results in the incident of theft. Furthermore, there will appear hostile fans’ violence due to unpleasure with the matches’ result. Additionally, organising global sporting events can exert pressure on publid budget, which enables one nation’s economy to be exhausted. This is due to the complex demand for preparation process, the host will lack investment in frustructure and facilities construction, which may result in public debt and low quality in each event.
Nevertheless, I would argue that the disadvantages pale in comparison with the advantages because of these following justifications. Firstly, hosting international sports event is considered to be the way to stimulate national economy. The host will have opportunity to gain profits from selling tickets, providing accomodations and trading local products for tourists when they set foot on this nation. Secondly, organizing global sporting competitions can boost torism. If the host leaves a strong impression with visitors, which means that it is well-prepared, hospitable, safe and sound, they will give word of mouth publicity to the hosting nation and pay a visit to this again. Last but not least, organizing sports event may lead to country’s sporting positive movement. As athletes in the hosting country will train hard to compete for the sake of patriotism, this nation will have more and more elite sportspeope, which is of paramount importance to develop sports.
In conclusion, there are certainly some downsides of hosting sporting event. By contrast, if the event is organised properly, I still believe that the benefits will exceed the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00722313829 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2632890139 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.235294118 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172191023079 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675908484647 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800020972219 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129310695541 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479920926559 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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