Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals .Do you agree or disagree with this point of view ? Why or why not ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this day and age, it is believed that saving lands for farmland, accommodating, and industrial activities will be better and essential than preserving them for endangered animals. To my mind, I disagree with this statement and this essay will help us gain in-depth knowledge about this issue.
The first factor to be considered is that keeping up saving lands will reduce the risk of pushing these endangered animal to the brink of extinction. If these animals disappear day by day, human will face existential threat as well as experience the environmental impacts. We can illustrate that environmental impact following by infectious diseases is considered to be the most serious impact due to the lack of habitats for animals living. Another factor to be considered is that saving lands for farmland, housing and industry will lead to urbanization which will break the balance between human's life and natural world. The more facilities they build, the more pollution it has. It can be seen that developing severe breathing problems is probability due to the air pollution as well as soil pollution contributed by activities in farmland and industry, the household wastes are the major cause of this issue. Finally, endangered animals have functions of balancing of nature. Thanks to this, humans will reduce the risk of falling into extreme poverty or even extinct because of the appearance of many severe disaster or the destruction of ecological systems. For instance, it can be seen that many countries in the world persuade their dwellers to take action to preserve and create habitat for animals which will be good for both economy as well as society life.
In conclusion , farmland, housing and industry will be not as crucial as saving lands for endangered animals to build up better future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12203389831 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78320767786 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538983050847 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5719372116 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.916666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242330349221 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101118661593 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668518463128 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209331968657 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274034835587 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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