Some people think that individuals are born to be leaders, others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give your opinion
people have different views about what makes a great leader. while some people think that leadership itself is a natural skill, I would argue that it is essential to have experience and knowledge in order to be a leader.
On the one hand, it is believed that some people have an inborn ability to become a leader. The first suggestion is that individuals who have innate intelligence are able to react and solve problems quickly. For example, my father who has never taken part in any leadership courses has successfully managed his own restaurant and made a fortune with it. Additionally, when a person is exceptionally talented, he or she might stand a higher chance of being trusted by other people. Therefore, he or she is more likely to hold managerial positions. An illustration of this is that the most skillful player in a football team is usually a captain armband.
On the other hand, I advocate that leadership is something that can be achieved and acquired throughout time. Firstly, people should spend their time on experiencing and absorbing a set of skills so as to climb up their career ladder. For instance, many organizations around the world have held various intensive training sessions that help employees to have a deep understanding of what tasks a manager should perform such as utilizing his or her human resources. Secondly, it is a must for administrators to gain specialized knowledge of their domain. If an individual lacks experience or core competencies, he or she could be incredibly challenging to be a good manager.
In conclusion, while some people are in favor of inborn personal traits to become a leader, I believe it is a process of learning and accumulating knowledge to be a future leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92881355932 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00581835473 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.388374254 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228210159415 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751221668529 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707133260187 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14517369546 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284151147209 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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