Developments in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Humans have experienced recent technological improvements, which somehow bring about urgent environmental problems. while some people believe that it is necessary to live a simple life in order to tackle these issues, I would argue that technological advances can help to address matters related to the environment.
On the one hand, it is believed that some people advocate the need to live simple lives and relying less on technology. The first suggestion is that people can choose to use some environmentally friendly vehicles such as bicycles as opposed to some means of transport that need fuel to activate. This is because the number of cars being manufactured has been increasing rapidly, which causes high levels of exhausted fumes and air pollution. Additionally, people should reduce their consumption of electricity so that the exploitation of natural resources can be minimized. For example, Earth House is a campaign that ones involved should save their household energy by turning all the lights off.
On the other hand, the developments in technology can shed light on finding ways to mitigate the severity of environmental problems. First, the improvements in technology have opened the possibility of recycling such as paper or glass, which helps reduce waste disposal. Second, some sources of renewable energy such as solar energy can be utilized to generate electricity. For instance, in some parts of the world, many households have been equipped with panels that can absorb sunlight to produce electricity. As a result, it is not essential to count on non-renewable energy such as fossil fuel.
In conclusion, while living simpler lives can be considered to be an effective way to help nature. I would argue that technology can contribute greatly to the protection of nature and surroundings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33922261484 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05373960502 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0751034068 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279695514953 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093261243923 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872044081339 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178431489189 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755231024751 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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