The internet has dramatically altered over lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
In recent years, it it " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">can be noticed that the internet has brought significant changes to our lives. Despite some obvious negatives of this trend, I would argue that these these " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">are outweighed by the advantages.
On the one hand, there are two major drawbacks that making use of the internet may bring about. first of all, a growing number of websites contain offensive content, which would have a negative impact on children. In fact, kids are always curious about everything around them and because of that, they are more likely to be exposed to some some " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">appropriate information such as sexual images or violent stories when going online themselves. Second, as parents do not know who their children are chatting to, there is a likelihood that they find it difficult to what their children see online. As a result, children might stand a higher chance of facing privacy invasion from strangers, which may put them into unexpected jeopardy.
On the other hand, I believe that these drawbacks drawbacks " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">are outweighed by the benefits. The first suggestion is that it has revolutionized communication. this is mainly because because " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">nowadays people are able to keep in touch by email or instant messenger services, which in turn saves a great amount of time. Additionally, enterprises would take advantage of the internet as a way to promote their products. Facebook, for example, is an online social site that enables companies to advertise their products, which in turn raises brand awareness.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the merits of the internet are more profound than the demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91692307692 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.86953386181 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547692307692 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1791393967 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.923076923 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0496605540167 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223379552208 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0174862023607 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0372905212445 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104243149816 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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