Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As time change, the circumstances changes, so do the related things. Environmental changes are very common these days due to various factors. It is often opine by some people that, we need to learn how to live with the climate change rather than preventing it's change. However, I agree that prevention of climate change is necessary too.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why people think that we need to start living with the climate change and adjust accordingly. To begin with, In prevention of climate change a lot of investment is required which was not possible at the first place. Secondly, It is very hard to control the increase of population which is the main factor for climate change. For example, With the growth of population there is rise in the usage of resources, which in turn lead to environmental problems and affect climate negatively. Therefore, some steps need to be taken to prevent climate changes.
On the other hand, I believe prevention of climate change is required to save the planet. Firstly, To live longer and healthy life prevention of climate change is the basic need. For instance, high rise or drop in the temperature due to climate change is a demerit for the living beings, and lead to decrease in life span. In addition to this, due to environmental change there is always a tendency of natural disasters like earthquake, Tsunami, Flood and many more, these disasters can cause serious damage to the society. That is why it is needed to prevent climate change.
In conclusion, Although some people argue that to find a way to live with the climate change, but In my opinion, prevention of change in climate is required as well, to live longer life and to prevent natural disasters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...d a way to live with the climate change, but In my opinion, prevention of change ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88590604027 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65000405812 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496644295302 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8696224663 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1333333333 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30425752866 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120409660612 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722674105065 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21395093841 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259435416944 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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