Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people argue that we need to leave apart the research of a solution for the environmental issues in order to focus all our energies in learning how to face it. Personally, I agree that understanding how to live with this problem has a crucial importance for the society, yet, I still insist that we should not give up on scientific research improve the health of our planet and, thus, find a long-term solution.
On the one hand, it may seems demoralizing that just little improvement have been seen in the last years confronted to the massive efforts which have been done by both the scientific community and the governments. Hence, we should start accepting that a solution may not be found, at least in the very next future. For this reason, learning the best way to live with this problem, even without the prospective to find a final solution, would still be helpful as it would limit the damages. For instance, we ought to avoid the estinction of some rare species, as the polar bear, recreating their ecosystem in specifical centres or, moreover, we might understand how to handle the even more frequence fires, that are leading to the distruction of many forest all around the world. A significant example of this, are the fires that have ruined Australia one years ago and that have created damages not only related to the environment but also to the economy of the country.
On the other hand, we must not stop the research of a final solution, since the problem is so enormous that it cannot be handled just by little arrangements. A lot have been already done and I am firmly convinced that just persisting on the policies we have been imposing during the last years, we will reach a solution. Thus, governments should continue to raise awareness among citizens and to prevent the environment , for instance, by adding more bins around the city or by financing part of the cost of hybrid cars. Likewise, the contribute of the scientific community is fundamental. They may be able to improve the health of the Earth, for example, by discovering a chemical substance that improve the conditions of our atmosphere and, thus, of our climate.
In conclusion, I find myself in agreement with the statement reported, since I consider it important to find some temporary solutions, nevertheless I insist that a final solution should still be researched, because the little adjustements, one day, may not be enough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 746, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun forest seems to be countable; consider using: 'many forests'.
Suggestion: many forests
... that are leading to the distruction of many forest all around the world. A significant exa...
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Line 3, column 852, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one year', 'a year', or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: one year; a year; years
...re the fires that have ruined Australia one years ago and that have created damages not o...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... citizens and to prevent the environment , for instance, by adding more bins aroun...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t of the cost of hybrid cars. Likewise, the contribute of the scientific community is fundamen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, likewise, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86024096386 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78192931003 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2350647793 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.153846154 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9230769231 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131642612237 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451240685709 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375837570532 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855227425234 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327824718001 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.