Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Although it is sometimes thought the being intelligence is inborn, other people belive that it can be learned. In my opinion, I consider that intelligence and mastery of skills is possible through continuous learning and practice of skills.
On the one hand, some people think that intelligence can develop through consistent learning and I agree. In other words, religiously studying a subject leads to increase comprehension and mastery of topic which, consequently, produce a high level of mental capacity. For instance, children in India are taught a specific techniques in solving math problems. This method is unique from the rest of the world and it gives them a head start in international competitions. Furthermore, the more we practice a skill, the better we become. Health care professionals, especially doctors, dedicated many years in practising their skills and memorizing by heart the human parts, organs and its function to provide quality care.
On the other hand, it is often believed that some people are born geniuses. This means that they have natural abilities or talents inherited from their family lineage or a mutation in their genes. Mozart, for example, is one of many examples of child prodigies who could compose music at an early age. Similarly, Shaira Luna, who graduated university at the age of 14, is nationally known for her capabilities to absorb loads of information in one sitting. Moreover, intelligence is inborn because not all people is created equal. There are few chosen people who possessed high level reasoning and gifted talents.
In conclusion, while people may vary their opinions, I think that an upgraded intelligence of individual is a result of determination and hard work in mastering their craft.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and, some people think that intelligence can develop through consistent learning ...
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Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
... is created equal. There are few chosen people who possessed high level reasoning and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26690391459 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95209404225 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629893238434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4301462467 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1333333333 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246723622457 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772241529128 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855508018964 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150985492395 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457776045932 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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