Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution, others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is considered to be some that, tackle the air pollution by introduce the international car-free days every where. while, there are others think that many other ways to solute this. However, in my opinion, not only the special days,but also every days must be control the pollution in any ways. Whereas, this essay will discuss about the both point of view .
On the one hand, many think that, as make use of car free days ensure the better pollution free environment. In other words, encouraging the people to do their daily activities by without assistance of their own vehicle. I disagree with this attitude towards the air pollution because, neither of one day nor two days would not control the atmospheric corruption by road traffic pollution, which should be control every day in any manner. For instance, send the students to the school bus instead of sending them private car. similarly, for the officers arrange the office vehicle to travel as a bulk to the departure.
On the other hand, some suggest that there is many ways to control the air pollution than the car- free days. It is often argued that, awareness program's related to the pollution, in terms of researches regarding the cause and solutions and so on. I agree with this strategy that, such solutions have had better effect on to the society and attitudes on to the air pollution. For example, students are insisted to learn such disasters in recent future would make them aware of excessive usage of vehicle for the simple purposes.
in conclusion, enhance the pollution free environment by the complex phenomenon in recent days.To control such problems by the negotiate conservation of many ideas from different people rather than one or two allotted days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95221843003 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56992766549 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1222864364 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295640704584 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100244983483 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849612609666 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171294684655 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103435834745 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.